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Wow. I really enjoyed this. It's intense, short but that doesn't matter. Well done, so keep up the good work!

I really liked this. My only picky part in this is that you don't have to start two new lines when somebody is speaking. That is my only problem, but ...

One Month Later… 15th Of April Life in my own house. Living with my boyfriend. Living with two things inside of me. Having to put up with people asking how ...

I find this really sweet. It made me go awww inside. I really enjoyed. By the way, the start of a new line in a poem, whatever the word, usually ...

It's long for a prologue, but who cares!? I really liked it and I loved the choice of names. That really stood out, and the names can explain a lot ...

This is really good, I haven't got much to say because of me not reading it all, but so far, I'm enjoying it. Can I just ask what the actual ...

Omg omg omg omg! I love you guys! You make me feel so happy, I will definatly continue this. Thank you sooooooo much for your positive comments. :mrgreen:

I agree with the above comments. After I've read most of your stuff, this... your short story, I get the impression your an excited person. Tone down the capital letters, ...

I found this confusing. The ending just jumps to it a bit. But never mind. Also, your using to many exclamation marks. :!: It's to much and makes the story ...

This is my first go at poetry, so I may be a little rusty. Thank you for your reviews and be sure to read and review my novels. Enjoy. I ...

This is really good and I enjoyed it. Good wording and writing skills. I enjoyed it and will be looking out for more additions soon! :wink:

Short but really good. I'm in a rush, so I'll adapt on this a bit later. It's very interesting and I would like to read more soon, so keep up ...

I didn't find much faults in this. It proves that a poem doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem. If you get what I'm saying. This is good, and ...

I liked it, poems aren't really my kind of thing but I found this very good. Keep up the good writing! :D

Here is me being picky. Sorry... "She is too powerful to exist in this world any longer." H is icy breath froze in the ornate mirror. A message appeared in ...