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Re: Losing Touch - Introduction
Can I just add, maybe you should'nt put the Hey YWS! part in it, because I find it destracting and your mind can focus on that, and most non-intelligent may ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Joy [Prologue]
Prologue I’m Amber. Amber Powers. My life isn’t the normal kind of life you know about. I’m the youngest out of my four sisters. Louisa is the eldest, but Cassie ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Hey, To cut to the chase, you use the word pain way to much! It gets so boring and dull when you've heard the same word over and over again. ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Prologue
This is really interesting and I can't wait to read the very first chapter. I know it may sound weird but I like the title, it was the first thing ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [May]
Wow, thanks so much. Weird because I do like Meg Cabot's writing... :D Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me :)
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Internet Safety
People should always follow this vital information. Type into youtube Matt Thought He Knew. It's about this boy who thought he was chatting to a girl, but really he was ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Red Roses and a Golden Night
Nina. Hmmm… I like it. It’s cool yet catchy. Nina… Yes, I like it very much. You’re probably wondering why I’m talking such rubbish. It because we have to choose ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: The Ghost Whistperer: Proluge
It was okay, I think. I got bored with it, so it's lucky it's short. I think it's good for someone who likes this sort of thing, but not me. ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: My Brother's News
For one, why have you spaced every single sentance out??? It really annoys me and also, it doesn't make it look longer, it makes it look shorter to me. You ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [May]
1st Of May Eighteen days until my eighteenth birthday. The only suckish thing about that is that I’m six months pregnant almost, and due date is on the ninth of ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Awwww, those piggies are so cute. I love pigs.
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Country by the Sea
This is so clever and I really enjoyed it. I found that you are a really good and deep writer which is what I like about you. I really did ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Alpha Day Chapter One
Very nice idea! I really liked it, the idea is really good and you seem to really know what you are doing and how you are going to put it. ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: The Song
Considering you wrote this a while ago, it's pretty good. I like the whole image of it, so well done. I did like it, so keep up the good work. ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Sick, Polluted City
Hi! bugbug368 came to review! This is very interested. It's confusing, but very interesting. I didn't like it that much. It was too short for me, maybe you could explain ...
Mar 10, 2011
