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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Losing Touch - Introduction

    Can I just add, maybe you should'nt put the Hey YWS! part in it, because I find it destracting and your mind can focus on that, and most non-intelligent may ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Joy [Prologue]

    Prologue I’m Amber. Amber Powers. My life isn’t the normal kind of life you know about. I’m the youngest out of my four sisters. Louisa is the eldest, but Cassie ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Forbidden Love

    Hey, To cut to the chase, you use the word pain way to much! It gets so boring and dull when you've heard the same word over and over again. ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: She's such a Drama Queen Prologue

    This is really interesting and I can't wait to read the very first chapter. I know it may sound weird but I like the title, it was the first thing ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: When I Fell Pregnant [May]

    Wow, thanks so much. Weird because I do like Meg Cabot's writing... :D Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me :)

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Information Desk Re: Internet Safety

    People should always follow this vital information. Type into youtube Matt Thought He Knew. It's about this boy who thought he was chatting to a girl, but really he was ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Red Roses and a Golden Night

    Nina. Hmmm… I like it. It’s cool yet catchy. Nina… Yes, I like it very much. You’re probably wondering why I’m talking such rubbish. It because we have to choose ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Ghost Whistperer: Proluge

    It was okay, I think. I got bored with it, so it's lucky it's short. I think it's good for someone who likes this sort of thing, but not me. ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Brother's News

    For one, why have you spaced every single sentance out??? It really annoys me and also, it doesn't make it look longer, it makes it look shorter to me. You ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: When I Fell Pregnant [May]

    1st Of May Eighteen days until my eighteenth birthday. The only suckish thing about that is that I’m six months pregnant almost, and due date is on the ninth of ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    Awwww, those piggies are so cute. I love pigs.

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Country by the Sea

    This is so clever and I really enjoyed it. I found that you are a really good and deep writer which is what I like about you. I really did ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Alpha Day Chapter One

    Very nice idea! I really liked it, the idea is really good and you seem to really know what you are doing and how you are going to put it. ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Song

    Considering you wrote this a while ago, it's pretty good. I like the whole image of it, so well done. I did like it, so keep up the good work. ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sick, Polluted City

    Hi! bugbug368 came to review! This is very interested. It's confusing, but very interesting. I didn't like it that much. It was too short for me, maybe you could explain ...

    Mar 10, 2011


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