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I found this very confusing. For a start, there is no title and there isn't even a plot written down! Not even a short description on what it's about. I ...

Er... I didn't like this at all. For a start, there shouldn't be a semi-colon after the word chelsea. Chelsea colon: Why couldn't I be her? Only needs one question ...

Omg, I love review days! It gives the oppurtunity for everybody to make reviews and people with little reviews on their work will get at least one. I think. :wink:

Yeah, no offence but posting this as a document is a little pointless. If this is supposed to be a short story, does it matter if it's too long anyway? ...

Hey, I'm here to review! This is very emotional, powerful peice of writing. I like it, not something I would have chosen to read, but to the end I realised ...

This is amazing! I love how the first lines just get you drawn in. I personally loved it and you obviously have a talent for writing poetry. The title doesn't ...

Hey, I'm here to review! Aren't you lucky? Okay, I'm just gonna cut to the chase. “I’m in the business of misery; let’s take it from the top.” The words ...

You are such a good drawer! They are so cool so well done, I couldn't draw to save my life so you should feel lucky that you were blessed with ...

Whoa! This is awesome! It's so catchy and I can kind of get the tune in my head, so that's a good sign. This is my one of the first ...

This is pretty good. Can I just add one thing? The segments, or whatever you want to call them, are a bit too long for me. Maybe you could split ...

When I read the plot, I was wondering how it would be like. So then I clicked on this and I read it and I was so pleased on how ...

1st Of July Bailey seemed so much calmer in the new veterinary today. Maybe he could sense how I felt. Dogs can do that, you know. Sense how their owner ...

Hey! Wow, this is long, but long means good. This is actually surprisingly good. I liked it alot, how you started it off as: "It started with a baby," Very ...

When you're young, you never notice what's going on What's happening outside In the life you have never lived When different origins say how bad life can be Nobody ever ...

Wow, nice. Very deep and you must have thought long and hard to make this. Is it based on you? Because if it is, then well done, I could maybe ...