bubblewrapped

There are so many different ways that I could be like a thousand mirrors, fragments of faces laugh as I smile. Did I learn my life from you? I have ...

I agree, I'm not sure about the last few lines. They seemed a bit jerky, particularly the last two. But I did like the tone of the piece, and the ...

Interesting. Not exactly unique, if you ask me, but you've got a nice style :wink: I'm going to go over this jsut quickly as its getting late, so bear with ...

I disagree. I think it's perfect the way it is (although mabbe I'm just a lazy critiquer, LOL). The syncopated rhythm really got me, as did the vagueness. You can ...

Well, since you asked so nicely...I'll take this verse by verse. As I stumble onto the stage My shadow walks beside me without complaint Silent slender feet padding onto the ...

Yes, I agree - this is a lovely soft piece. Not sure about the second stanza - the last line seems a little (dare I say it) cliche to me, ...

This is an old one that I just "dug up" haha...found it in a folder and liked it so figured I'd post it here for polishing. Lessons in Anatomy dead ...

I couldnt figure where to put this, so it ended up here, like most of my stuff! Needs a bit of work, but its only a first draft so help ...

(Side note: what does ftw mean?) I chose other because I do both- I get books from the library en masse because otherwise I'd never have enough to read. But ...

I dont really mind, I suppose. I'm happy wherever I go so long as I have my books and my internet connection...One place I'd love to have a house though ...

I LOVE CALVIN AND HOBBES!!!!!.....**coughs** OK. Yes. Well, I have to confess: I completely b.s.'d my way through English too. Once I got the hang of what they wanted it ...

Aha! I figured it out!!!

Um....I added something but I dont know how to add options. Whenever I try what it says on the Main Page, I just get a "please add a note to ...

I agree that it wasnt quite as smooth as it could have been, but the link between the title and the ending was well done and I loved the ending ...

Always Buchanan ;)