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I have to agree with write me. The idea is excellent - I know that feeling so well - but it isnt working in this format. Revision is necessary. I ...

Recollection didn’t come easy to him. Like déjà vu, it came capricious. But he didn’t have déjà vu--and never had. OK, first off. I like this opening sentence, but – ...

REVISED v.2.0 There are so many different ways that I could be like a thousand mirrors, fragments of faces laugh as I smile. Did I learn my life from you? ...

Hey Miss*Mary, here's your first review :) I'll go through it verse by verse and tell you what I think, OK? *Gasp! The knife falls, upon upturned flesh. the scar--bright ...

Wow. Who can follow a crit like that? LOL. I shall be brief, then. I particularly liked the revision - it wasnt as ... sweet as the first, you know? ...

It rhymed? O_O Oh yes, it did. Gotta agree with Inertia there - very natural, I pretty much didnt notice it flowed so well (and trust me, I usually notice ...

Hush, Brad, remember what we've told you about using your claws on newbies! You might scare them all away! Dont mind him, in_too_deep, he is a great poet but he ...

Ooh DQ's channelling Incandescence! Anyway, I dont mean to be rude but I must say I agree about the goose. Why a goose? It doesnt make sense. Well, I'm going ...

Green Shores of Home green is of meadows and open ground, of endless horizons; green length and breadth, shadow and depth - the green crayon is a sea in sunshine, ...

Aha! Vindication, if ever there was such a thing! I felt a bit guilty about not sticking wtih English (under the delusion that All Great Writers study All the Other ...

AHH. Just double-checked. Addy was wrong! Only - strange thing is, I changed it to the right one ages ago....??? Anyway, hopefully I should get the next newsletter now :)

I didnt get it :( My email is right too!

"O for a Muse of Fire" is Shakespeare - Henry V. No idea about the tigers though O_O On another note, a really interesting poem. It fit perfectly with my ...

Personally, I like it the way it is. Granted, I've never been much of a stickler for anything (except spelling, but no complaints there), so I'm not fussy. But I ...

LOL I'll add my praise too - very cool story. One thing you might want to fix; it's "in a manner of speaking" not "a matter of speaking" as you ...