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Amara: **click** Amara's Answering Machine: Hello. You have reached the central palace. Unfortunately there is no-one here to take your call at present. If this is an emergency, press 1. ...

"That's none of your concern." -- Amara "Yes, actually, I do." -- Alexande Everyone has a price. What's yours?

I liked it, in a disinterested kind of way, but Incan is right -- there's nothing here which gives me that sudden feeling of enlightenment which is the hallmark of ...

Hey green river :) An excellent poem -- love the rich imagery (foood LOL). A few things I'd like to mention: Broken teeth stand as gaurdians in front of the ...

Hello Trident! I'm sorry to tell you this (I know you really want me to be harsh, LMAO) but I actually really liked this. :lol: One of those tepid nights ...

The House of Mirth by Edith Wharton. Sad, very sad. But superbly written. Lovely "voice". One of my absolute faves :D

I like the sort of double meaning you have going here. There are a few words which dont seem to fit, like Meshy said, but otherwise a great (and intriguing) ...

Hey! Nice to see some more work from you. This is a great poem, IMHO, although I take issue with a couple of things: 1. Line breaks. These can be ...

Hey lillizard! No crits on this one - shocking! We'll have to do something about that :) I really like the concept here. It's a bit confusing at this stage ...

I dont get nearly as many reviews as I should like. But I can be kind of slack at giving them (I've just started to give more lately thanks to ...

Wow. Like xantham said, a real breath of fresh air. A balanced, well-organized and well-written piece of work. Kudos to you! Unfortunatley I have no suggestions for its improvement, as ...

I hesitate to critique this for the simple reason that I find it hard to know what to say. That is, as write me said, it's clear how you *want* ...

I second xantham gum's assessment. There is a lot of extraneous info in here. And "faking" seems irrelevant and somewhat stupid -- dont shove your message down our throats, make ...

First, let me compliment you on a lovely idea: this is a beautiful poem and a beautiful concept. But (and you knew this was coming) even the best of ideas ...

I loved this, actually :D The images invoked are intriguing and just vague enough to make me want to read more, but not so vague as I think WTH?? So ...