bubblewrapped

Hmm... - Biggles Looks Back - Biggles in Spain - The House of Mirth - Gone With the Wind - Captain Corelli's Mandolin - The French Lieutenant's Woman - The ...

Way to stretch the thread, Mr. Everyone! Anyways, some interesting thoughts here (would never have seen that coming, El, but now that you point it out---SO obvious! LOL). Personally I ...

Mr. Everyone -- Nobody's disputing that. But since your experience is so close, your memory of it should be pretty vivid. ry and put some of that in your poem. ...

Lady Grace: **the sound of someone fainting** BEEP! The answering machine of Sir Gabriel: Hello. I'm out chasing demons at the moment. If you've just killed an entire village, press ...

This is a story about well feathers I guess and friends and things starting with f like, frisbee, and forgetmenot and frightening finger pokers with fluffy frou-frou hair dos and ...

Granted, but then it gets stolen and you're not insured! I wish I had a pet hedgehog

Monkey! Why? Because monkey, monkey, monkey! No, but seriously. I reckon monkeys are actually symbolic of writers in general. We'll do anything for bananas.

Hello! We meet again. You have been seriously SPEWed now ^_^ FIRST of all, the title. Please edit the title! **begs** LOL. Sorry, but when I first saw it I ...

Um. OK. My biggest reaction on reading this poem was, "so what?" Seriously - it's not like I dont care that people die in hurricanes, and all, but this poem ...

Hi there! I see we meet again! Nice to see you're using some more punctuation in this one and some more formatting. Kudos! Still, you might want to think about ...

Welcome to YWS! Pleased to have you with us :) Unfortunately I'm going to have to be ruthless here. As it stands, this is just one big run-on sentence. Where ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! First off, I want to compliment you on your rhyming. You're one of the few poets I've met on here (no offense anyone) who can ...

I agree with miyaviloves- it seems a bit flat at the moment. Nice to see you're taking critiques on board though! I think a bit of rearranging (regarding line breaks ...

This was certainly very emotional, and I liked the unique way you explained through questions, rather than simple sentences, up until the last verse. You clearly have an instinctive grasp ...

LOL I love these - especially yours Claudette. Very intriguing! But they're difficult to make up...>.< He still left the light on.