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ibelieve_inme I appreciate that you're proud of your poem. I've won poetry competitions too, and it's a real rush, so congratulations! However, just because a poem has won awards does ...

Thanks guys :)

**falls over** Wow, cool! I got an award :D

Cheers Phorcys -- I really did enjoy reading the story so far. Let me know when you post more and I'll crit that too...MUAAHAHA... OK, I'm going now LOL

Incan, you know you're insane, right? Otherwise, though -- very funny :lol:

Hey again! Nice to see you're taking crits on board -- this second draft is much better :) NIGGLES: If I can not touch them, The cold of my self ...

Hey LL! Nice to see some of your work at last :D I second most of what cadmium said about consistency - the stanzas arent very well connected, so I'd ...

Aloha! Someone else from this hemisphere -- cool bananas! Hope you're enjoying YWS so far, I'll look forward to reading (and seeing) some of your work :) Cheers, ~bubbles PS: ...

I have no idea. Seriously. I mean, I'm influenced by pretty much every book I read, but to list them all is pretty much impossible and I cant pinpoint any ...

Take a bow! No, seriously. Because that is one of the most unique and mature poems I've read from a new member (no offense, anyone, but you gotta agree). Of ...

Granted, but now people go insane because they have no point of reference to work out what reality is. I wish I was psychic

I wouldnt say overdone so much as underdone, really. I agree with Mr. Everybody that it was full of nothing -- there are some beautiful and intriguing images in there, ...

Hmm. Well, it was nice, but I'm afraid some of your grammatical errors and the difficult rhyme scheme rather spoiled it for me by distracting my attention. the sun rise ...

I heard about that. Freaky. Makes me glad I live in NZ, to be honest. **shudders**

Wow, that's really interesting. **drools over old documents** Seriously though. Thanks for sharing, Nate ^_^