bubblewrapped

8/10 - I like the Wilcox quote :)

I dont have time for a full critique now, but there are a couple of points I'd just like to make while I can: 1. Simplify. You need to make ...

Erm...I'm reading several things right now: The Alchemist's Key by Traci Harding The Early Victorians by J. F. C. Harrison The Girlhood of Queen Victoria 1832-1840 [Vol. 1] by HRH ...

YAY!!!!! **dances with Write Me** Monkey! :D

LMAO XD Very funny stuff :D

Hey, I quite enjoyed this. Especially the last line. Very poignant! I think there are a few things that could be polished a bit however, notably your description and punctuation/grammar. ...

Haha.... MONKEY!

"Darling," Georgiana said, curling a hesitant arm around her husband's shoulders. She felt him start, and wondered, as she always did, why he was so sensitive to being touched. Or ...

What about Wordmaster? Storyteller? Shakespeare? Future Librarian (lol)? ideas here. :roll:

Mon-key! Mon-key! Mon-key! :D

I'm getting young girl, possibly around 8yo with brown hair and freckles. Wears blue overalls and likes mud pies. :lol: Georgiana Beaumond

Muahahahahahahah...haha..hahhahah... **wanders off, wiping tears of laughter from eyes and hiccupping in a generally amused fashion** PAT BUCHANAN!

Love it :D I would nitpick a few things, but I dont have time right now. All I can really say is that in some parts the repetition is a ...

Me too! LOL.

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