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Re: You owe me
Tear it up? No way! I like this, it's interesting. But (and you knew this was coming) there are a few flaws... 1. Rhythm. When it's on target, it's awesome. ...
Mar 28, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Hannah sighed as the girl ran from the classroom. "That went well," she said glumly. Why did people always react badly to the idea of psychics? It wasnt as if ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: The Diary of Autumn Day Blake
Haha that was great. I am a sucker for a funny teen story. Unfortunately I liked it so much I am compelled to give a completely thorough critique... SO! Things ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
Oops, you beat me to it Clau LOL.
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
Jessica had never kept a journal. She had never had the kind of memories you wanted to fold away and keep, to revisit when you were old. But she did ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: 'The Strangest Dream' or 'The Ride of Nancy Nimbleheimer'
"I am Nancy Nimbleheimer, and I have come to conquer the world!" I wish I'd had this dream, LMAO. It sounds like a great deal of fun. I second BlackDove ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Too much... writing?
**raises hand** Me tooo! Lets see. I have about 2000 story ideas stored in a million different places. I currently have 1 novel I'm getting serious about (not that I ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Hannah caught hold of the girl's arm and drew her aside into the classroom. She pointed to a chair, and the girl sat. Hannah shut the door. "Am I in ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: The Black Veil
[[Any room for one more?]]
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: The Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Hannah Garrett 25 years Tall, slim with long, white-blond hair and brown eyes Psychometrist and apprentice witch Unbeknownst to the two teenagers, a young woman in a nearby classroom had ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Where In The World Is Carmen Sandeigo?
She paid me not to tell! Because I'm just corruptible like that ;) RANDOM BUBBLES FACTOID: When I was a kid, there was this computer game called "Where in the ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
The first thing Maria noticed was that everything was pink. The second thing she noticed was that this was not her bedroom. Sitting up, she looked around in astonishment at ...
Mar 23, 2007 -
Re: Life
Life is why we are all here, So cruel and fickle, One moment, we are on cloud nine, The next, in total despair. OK. No offense, but my attention is ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
6/10 cause it reminds me of Pratchett (good thing) but it's short (not so good thing) :D
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: In General, Most People Are...
People? What people?
Mar 20, 2007
