bubblewrapped

"The what now?"

[bubblewrapped] is pleased that someone agrees with her. "So, how long is it gonna take to complete the YWS Highwind, Adam? And why does it have such a weird name?"

[bubblewrapped] contemplates this. "Much as I enjoy blowing things up at random, I am starting to feel a little uneasy about those anti-magic thingamabobs."

Like, starting over? Or reorganization? Or just...yeah. Getting things back on track. So far as I know, Hannah died, was resurrected, and now miraculously has an ex-husband...none of which happened ...

[bubblewrapped] coughs. "I'm sure Res and Author are very sorry about your ship, fact, they informed me that they pooled their funds to buy you a new one." [bubblewrapped] nudges ...

Erm. No offense, but is there a point to this poem? This is more like what Snoink might call a "shopping-list". You're describing things to us, but you dont lead ...

[bubblewrapped] pokes author and the others in greeting. "I dunno. Don't we still have to prevent the manufacture and spread of those anti-magic devices, in order to save the future? ...

Erm, me too. Pardon my French, but WTF is going on? Why is Hannah dead/divorced/a single mother/god knows what else? Jeez, I dont post for a few days and everything ...

There are actually two groups already working on the critiquing thing - the NRJ and SPEW (which does not officially exist, so you didnt hear it from me). Also, a ...

7/10 I dunno...not a Manga fan

OMG, so many books... Famous Five, Secret Seven, Secret Island, etc. -- all of the mystery stories by Enid Blyton Animorphs Saddle Club Sweet Valley Twins/High/Jr. High/University Gymnasts Scrambled L

My life in haiku sounds much prettier. A very dull day for Bubbles.

No offense, but this sounds more like a character sketch than the beginning of a story. It's a bit short to get a good idea of your style, but the ...

That depends on the ultimate question. What colour are bones?

There's no such thing as a SPEW commando. - Evie