bubblewrapped

6/10 -- snapshot of a painting? Seems like it should mean something, but doesnt.

I've read approx. 21 I think. And I think I used to read the Oz series too, but I cant remember. My favourites are GWTW and all three books by ...

Your wish is my command, Sinister Jigster! Overall, my reaction was (sorry) one of anticlimax. Maybe it’s me, but I read so many things where the person gets sucked into ...

Yes. And the carrots over there also know what I am thinking! ... it's creepy ;)

8/10 but only 'cause it's POTC XD

6/10 life isnt a hellhole, and hellhole is one word. Or at least hyphenated. So yeah.

Haha I see great minds truly do think alike. I shall add my version: Harry and Voldemort have a dramatic stand-off! Sparks fly (literally)! When the smoke clears....they're all dead! ...

Yo Fabien! You asked for it, so here it is... Overall, I'm left feeling kinda flat here. The piece has promise, and I like the "provocative" (to steal Chevy's word) ...

Hi wildlove100%, Welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying the site so far :) Here's my take on your poem - keep in mind that this is just my opinion, but ...

Well, you asked for it, so here it is. Overall, this poem didnt really work for me. I'll tell you why: 1. Telling vs. Showing. Yes, this saying is getting ...

[bubblewrapped] is now thoroughly lost, and passes the time by singing to herself. That's the beauty of adventure/the trembling and the dread! I cant think of another thing I'd rather ...

I gotta go soon, so I'll have to make this quick. I love the edits -- particularly the addition to the scene with Lucifer. Perhaps you could add in there, ...

Haha, Jiggy, I love you! ... Well, OK, maybe not love, exactly, but this really did make me laugh XD First, the specifics: One, a tall ascetic looking fellow, glared ...

Wild monkeys couldnt keep me away from this site. I know. They've tried...XD

9/10 'cause she's so cute...and I