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5/10 - not sure I get it.

Most of what I would have pointed out was already covered in Jabber's lovely long crit, so I'll just give you my overall impressions. First of all, the idea is ...

7/10 creepy XD

8/10 hehehehehe

6/10 it's kind of depressing LOL

Either (a) run back up to the top of the building to try again or (b) wake up, because no way this is real life XD What would you do ...

Wow. I get the feeling I'm kind of missing half of the point of this, but I did enjoy the rhythm and imagery :lol: I'm not sure about the long ...

Hi Evangelina, Firstly, welcome to YWS! Nice to see some new faces around :) Just like to remind you that we'd really appreciate it if you could post a few ...

I love TV. **hugs TV set** Seriously, most of the shows arent that great, and I generally prefer a book, but I do get hooked on some - e.g. Spooks, ...

Hey Dreamer, You asked for it, so here it is :D First off, I like the simplicity of this poem. You've kept to your pattern and I think the changes ...

Hehe all the time. Particularly BAD movies/tv. Most of the time, I get so angry at the way the script-writer/director/actor(s) handled the concept that I run off to write my ...

It was a huge deal over here - that is, in New Zealand. I was about 10 when she died (god I feel old now) and I hadnt heard of ...

Erm. No offense, but that didnt really make sense. You have a beautiful idea (solstice = beauty in my mind) but I think it's spoiled by having to conform to ...

I was just thinking about this very topic today, actually. I came to the conclusion that I agree with Fand; there should be no unanswered/able questions in poetry. And I ...

I have nothing against rhyming poetry when it's done well . I've actually read some breathtaking poems which rhyme. However, I will admit that I encourage those who write bad ...