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Hi Howler, I really enjoyed this; it has a compelling rhythm, and the subject and tone were quite unique, making a refreshing change of pace from the other poems I've ...

Hi ireylcadence, I quite enjoyed this poem. You have a great feel for rhythm and the rhyme scheme - while a little stretched in places - was neat and quick, ...

Hi Jasmine Hart, I'd forgotten how much I enjoy your poetry :) I really liked this: the tone was taunting but still direct, and I was intrigued from the first ...

Hi Invisible Mann, I have to say, I quite liked this: the concept of "property in the sky" and someone trying to sell it to an uninterested buyer was quite ...

Hi GildedLily, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members: I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem ...

Hi itsaslowfade, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem ...

Hi nicchaos, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to post some reviews and get acquainted with the other members. I'm sure they'll all be pleased to meet you :) Re: your ...

Hi icanbefixed, You have a very interesting poem here. You obviously have a good grasp of line breaks and rhythm, and a strong message you want to put across. Unfortunately, ...

Hi nayex! I can see you're relatively new to YWS, so welcome :) It's always nice to see new 'faces' on the forums! Re: your poem, I can tell that ...

I like the ending of this piece; the penultimate stanza is a little preachy but there is some flourish in the last line. To be honest, though, the rest of ...

Day 30, Poem 4 Form: Terzanelle why women carry mirrors all women have three faces: it's a fact, like every bird has wings and fish have gills. they fit beneath ...

Day 30, Poem 3 Form: Pindaric Ode the telemarketer He holds the telephone up to his ear; a voice on the line says, sir, you should hear this offer we're ...

Day 30, Poem 2 Form: Chaucerian Roundel out of the rain He says, "Get in here," and she says "Later," as she stands on the low deck watching the weather, ...

Day 30, Poem 1 Form: Heroic Rispetto My Brown Coat Here am I, in my adult coat and shoes, a lonely figure on a football field. Each step is weighted ...

Day 29, Poem 2 Form: Palindrome (line unit) birds in motion and at rest i. rest nights are winged and softly pass. birds rest; in light and silence find each ...