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That's awesome! I think a bit more detail and sharpness is needed in the foreground, but I'm assuming you'd do that already. I love the light on the angel guy's ...

Hahah I love Dorothy Parker. The writing was a little hard to read, and I agree that there should be a capital for Christmas. Otherwise it was pretty funny though ...

I liked the first one of the ring - the black and white makes it stand out quite powerfully. The colours of the flowers were amazing. I particularly liked the ...

Wow. That was awesome - smokin', if you'll pardon the pun. There were a few things I felt which didn't mesh. For example: entrance Me as he ensured he was ...

To be perfectly honest, I've heard this a million times in almost in the exact same words. My advice to you would be to scrap this and start again. This ...

I love that first photo. I'm an eighties kid, lol, and I agree with you on the eighties vibe. And that kid looks so cute XD I couldnt load the ...

I'd definitely capitalize the i's but otherwise I think it's pretty good. You have a nice sense of rhythm and your rhymes are quite natural, not forced. Your images are ...

This is very repetitious and has very little for the reader to connect with. As Snoink would say, it's something of a "shopping list" poem. Try showing us rather than ...

I'm not much of an art critic, but like Via I would like to see more clarity with this. I don't know if it's just the quality of the image ...

Wow, these are gorgeous! I especially like numbers 2, 5, and 6. I'm not much of a photographer, so I can't really give any advice, but I love the colours ...

You have an interesting style XD I'm watching Pretty Woman at the moment, so the drawings reminded me a bit of Julia Roberts' character in the movie heh. I'm assuming ...

Whoa, you're pretty good Lancrist! I'm not much of an art critic, so I can't really give you any advice, 'though I will say that the edges are somewhat sharp ...

To be perfectly honest, I only got through half of it before I had to stop. Four pieces of advice: 1. Punctuate. It really helps the reader figure out how ...

This sounded like it had a lot to say, but there was only one problem - I couldn't really understand it. Now maybe that's just because I'm distracted and my ...

Hmm. You have a good grasp of rhythm and keep to it well; the repetition is used effectively, and I like the tone throughout. A few bits need to be ...