bubblewrapped

I confess. I've been a very bad Jr. Mod. I've been pretty much inactive on YWS for god knows how long now, in spite of my best intentions not to ...

Edited to add a rating. Please try to remember to rate your poetry in the future. Thanks :) Cheers, ~bubbles

Hey there, welcome to YWS. I've moved this into Other Fiction for you as I don't really think it fits in poetry. Cheers, ~bubbles

Only one?! I can think of so many stupid things... Let's see. When I was a little kid my mum took me and my then-best friend to see Beauty and ...

Heh, I'm not really one for celebrity-crushing - like OverEasy said, usually it's about the character more than the actor for me - but if I had to name a ...

I really love this poem. It's got a great tone to it that really suits the subject matter. I loved this part in particular: So you think your husband ever ...

Moved to the Lyric section for you. Lyric Poetry is slightly different :) Cheers, ~bubbles

Hi there, welcome to YWS! You've made a good start with this poem; I really love the concept. Before I get into a critique, however, I'd just like to remind ...

OK, a couple of things: 1. darko.demark666 , please refrain from using chatspeak in the forum and from insulting other members. You're entitled to your opinion, but calling Thien a ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! You've made a good start with this poem; I love the rhythm, although I think you need to add a bit of punctuation to help ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! You've made a good start with this poem; I like the concept, although I think it would benefit from a bit more punctuation and a ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! You've made a good start with this poem; the rhyming is hardly forced at all and the rhythm works well with the subject matter. You ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! Before I get fully into a critique, however, I'd just like to remind you of the site rules (see HERE for more info). YWS has ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! You've made a good start with this poem; I like the concept, although I think it could use a bit more punctuation to help the ...

Edited to remove (I'm assuming) your name from the end. Just as a matter of 'net safety it's better not to give your full name online - you never know ...