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I think this poem is OK - it obviously has good intentions and the concept behind it is a good one, with a solid basis of emotion and great potential ...

Thanks for your reviews guys! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Like I said, its one of my favourites. And, Firestarter, I'll tell you a secret...I've never even tasted wine ...

Thanks for the advice guys! So you reckon it should read something like this...? A Drop of Water I am a drop of water Life is my window And I ...

This is one of my favourite (rhyming) poem's I've written and I'd appreciate any hints on how to improve it. Its still in raw, just-as-it-was-written form, so I know there ...

I like the concept behind this - I can definitely relate. The rhyme style isnt one I would have chosen (I'm prejudiced against certain styles, lol) but that's just me. ...

"Things I think about in the shower. " I really love this line, primarily because, as carsandguitars said, it does throw you off. I like the way it makes it ...

LMAO thats both cute and funny...I like the use of "Oh", it gives it the exaggerated sense of a love poem - to a shirt! It cracks me up. Like ...

I'm not sure about this one. I've only just started to work with non-rhyming poetry (I used to hate blank verse, etc., coz it didnt rhyme..I cant believe myself, sometimes, ...

I love this poem! There's too much I like to tell you everything, but the parts that I felt were the best were the first stanza, the almost anti-climactic way ...

Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Does anyone have any title suggestions? I think "Midnight Swim" is kinda mundane but I was in a hurry at the ...

LOL Thanks for your advice. I'm happy now- EXAMS ARE OVER! WHEEE! No more essays, thank god. My hand is so sore though [holds up right hand to prove it] ...

It sits there like a photograph, a still life painted in the corners of my mind. Leaning closer, I brush aside the cobwebs and taste the colours on my fingertips; ...

...of some serious cheering up. I just had a set of sucky exams at school (I swear, I failed everything but Classics) - and I have another even harder one ...