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I agree, it was kind of abrupt in places. But its an effective abruptness, and does nothing to detract from the poem itself. Blue eyes Watch They sparkle Delighted At ...

I know the feeling, Firestarter & Galatea! Its so ridiculous. I'm not even supposed to say "Maori" because apparently its offensive, but I do anyway, because they call us "Pakeha" ...

The Sound of Strings strung with the music I am playing notes are wrapped around my fingertips and twining in my hair like moonbeams – shining fresh as raindrops and ...

I'm a flautist, but I can dabble a bit on the keyboard/piano and I know some clarinet and trumpet. I tried the violin once - ick! But I love the ...

I live in New Zealand. Despite my distinct lack of patriotism, NZ is a fine country, with a lot of different religious and racial groups, including Asian, Fijian, European and ...

I kinda like it. Its a bit short, but it puts into words precisely something I often feel. Well done. A nice little piece, very succinctly put.

:? :shock: OK, that was...odd...hilarious, but odd. I love the last line especially, and I definitely agree that sometimes poetry needs to be light as well as dark...or at the ...

Yes, I agree with Firestarter - very thought-provoking. It does need some work, however, in my opinion. I walk through the Hall The Hall of 100 Mirrors. In each one ...

I know what you mean about not wanting to touch a piece once its finished...its kind of like painting, I guess. Dont want to ruin things! I'm trying to get ...

HI Gracey! How do you do? Nice to meet you! Congratulations on turning 13 (my favourite number). Looking forward to reading your work :D

Hello! Hi there! Nice to meet you! [wrings your hand vigorously] I like the quote in your sig - so true! Welcome to the new TYWS site (I assume you ...

Interesting...I cant personally say I liked it but that is only my opinion based on emotion not reason hehe. Its actually quite a good poem. Lying there, in the grass, ...

Beautiful! Simply beautiful. I've read this poem several times but never had time to comment on it, so I will now :) Elegant. (

PS - I read Donna J. Napoli...Beast was about Beauty and the Beast, but I've never heard of Zel. The Little Mermaid or something? And Spinners...Rumpelstiltskin? Dunno...

Hmm. Lets look at this logically. Myths are made up (fiction) by historical societies and treated as religious fact (non-fiction, religious section) like the Bible (ditto). Fairytales & folk tales ...