bubblewrapped

Cheers, CarsandGuitars - I changed the title now lol s ohpefully it wont put ppl off anymore. Ta for the review. :D

Ah, the poem born of one of my many - well, passions. Its OK I guess, nothing spectacular. But hell if it dont get right down and dirty with the ...

Thanks guys! I will work on that cliche ending though, Nate, ta - and I'd be honoured if you read it to those kids :D Thanks again for the input, ...

I'm not sure what I meant to say in this. I was toying with something I read in a book once, that there are some people who shouldnt stand to ...

Whee! I am the first representative of my own little corner of the globe - New Zealand! I once saw this ad from overseas about NZ on "The Funniest Advertisements ...

Beautiful. Truly beautiful. Days and nights and eons ago the sun ran away from the moon. he went to parts unknown--the universe he said, was his oyster. Love this section. ...

I'm sure you're tired of hearing this, but I LOVE this poem. The whole things. Utterly. Especially the title, which is what drew me to it in the first place. ...

Interesting...not the kind of rhyme scheme I would personally have chosen, but it works. I like the first two verses OK but in the third you changed the rhyme scheme ...

You are most welcome, penny :) I like dashes. Pauses without full-stops, changes of ideas, hyphens...lovely dashes LOL. By the way, kudos on the title, too - I love it!

I changed particular to boundless...dunno if it works any better though. Gah! I love the poem but I cant seem to...those last few lines...[wrestles with poem, which doesnt seem to ...

Once again, I love it. How do you do that? Maybe a minute amount of polishing to be done in the though... The lights in the city always go out ...

I've read Timeline - I'd say its science fiction, and the book is great, much better than the movie. Some fantasy I'd recommend - definitely Diana Wynne Jones and Ursula ...

I'm not sure about this one - I think the last few lines could use a bit of work. Any suggestions? Blue I look down at your face - Your ...

I confess, I do love the word honey. Sweet and thick and yummy! You'll probably notice I reuse ideas and impressions because they go with so much in my mind ...

Awesome! Seriously, I loved this poem - I'm not sure why, but it 'tickled my fancy' as they say, lol. Like wine, there is something in this poem that lurks ...