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There you go, guys, all done :) Sorry it took me so long, the "notify me of replies" function doesn't seem to be working >.< I'll have to remember to ...

Hey Mat, Here’s your review, as requested :) Darren brings the mug to his lips and takes a sip. He swishes it around in his mouth and winces. “Yuck,” he ...

Hi *writewatiwant* Here’s your review, as requested :) Poem #1: Dreams on a Spring Breeze I really like this one. There are a couple of places where the rhyme feels ...

Thanks Mesh. I've submitted that one to a competition, actually, so I'm glad to hear you like it XD April 19 Play it Again, Sam (Quatern) Turn up the gramophone, ...

Hey Peanut, Here's your review, as requested :) Overally, I liked the concept of this poem, and it was handled well. Most of the things I'd want to point out ...

Hi Jasmine, Here's your review, as requested (sorry I'm a bit late - it's supposed to tell me when people reply in that thread, but apparently it's decided not to ...

April 18 The Hive (Minute) I noticed most today that we were locked in three compartments; each just out of reach. Like honeycomb, sealed up in wax, there are no ...

This poem bothers me. The idea seemed to shift several times while I was writing, it and I feel it's a bit disjointed; at the same time, I find myself ...

Thanks, anti-pop :) April 16 On the Sale by Auction of Keats' Love Letters (Reprise) (Glosa) Ay! for each separate pulse of passion quote The merchant's price. I think they ...

Assuming I'm awake (and I don't forget) I'll be there.

April 15 Promises are Forever (Palindrome) You say forever Like I give promises: nothing is real. Things false between us entangle hearts and limbs in knots, strangling us in love ...

I kind of messed this up, because for some reason I keep thinking the interlocking rubaiyat is abaa instead of aaba, but whatever form this ended up being, here it ...

Not really pleased with today's efforts, but since I was up all night (yes, literally) last night I am too tired to see straight, let alone write coherently. Frankly, I'm ...

I absolutely love it. Again. Can I just write ditto from now on? XD Kidding. But seriously. The first stanza seems almost frivolous, but then the second one adds so ...

o_O snap, peanut. We both wrote about the same thing today - must be going around XD Nice poem :) The last stanza is a bit abrupt, as you said; ...