bubblewrapped

I know exactly what you mean, Firestarter. I get that all the time, mostly when I look at something I've just written and think *God, that stinks.* and then I ...

There are lots of ppl online, apparently, but nobody is posting (at least, nowhere I can see). Somebody talk to me! [shakes site] SPEAK! *ahem* Anyways, a big hellooooo to ...

Oh yes, I meant to post here but then I got a cold and couldnt come online and after that I forgot to even LOOK in the lounge but anyway, ...

Personally, being supremely shy, I'd say my advice to guys would be not to come on too strong. I dont know if its just me but persistence can be annoying ...

Wow, Incandescence actually said something moderately nice! LOL. Anyway, I've played with the ending a wee bit, its still quite a bit like the previous version though. Not sure whether ...

Well I dont think theres anything I can critique about this poem. Its awesome. Definitely haunting - chilling, even. I like the dark undertones despite the seeming innocence (a well-chosen ...

You're welcome Soyala :) Hope I wasnt too blunt though lol. I like it quite a bit better now you've made those changes. Its more coherent and you stick to ...

Personally I found it read as a song, which isnt altogether a bad thing. If I were you'd I'd set it to music as is...kind of a country western song, ...

Yay for you, nicklepickle! You've improved a great deal and for that I commend you heartily. A little bit of constructive criticism - She floats from place to place, Living ...

Well, there's definitely potential in here, but I personally felt you talked too much in some parts, if you know what I mean. Silence can often speak louder than words ...

I have to say I agree with Incandescence and Sam here. No offense, but - well - there isnt anything there, you know? There is no emotion, or if there ...

Well Sam, I know I'm not supposed to argue with you, but I would like to point out for the record that things that are ugly can be beautiful - ...

Living mostly in my own head, I've not really been aware of any outward censorship, at least in New Zealand. I have used a dictionary (this is laughable, but sadly ...

This is Not an Apology And I’m not sorry am I, because I never Apologize when I don’t mean it You can shout until your lungs turn blue and your ...

Sorry guys, but I'm with Incandescence on this. Been there, done that, its all been plastered over the TV screen several billion times...we dont want to hear it again! Frankly, ...