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You're right, the flagrant rambling-ness was intentional. I was trying to scare up inspiration, LOL, as well as trying to write around someone chatting on the phone as well as ...

Have to reiterate here - WOW. LOL. Its great. I had some problems with the flow the first time I read it, but then, sometimes it takes me a little ...

Hmh. Well. There are some good parts and some bad parts and overall it needs a lot of work, but it has potential to be very good so dont give ...

Dusk hot pink lemonade bursts through the unquiet hush of an early twilight humming with insect wings (mosquito’s like fiberglass needles pinching plump peach skin) and yes there is the ...

I use IE, mostly because its what I'm most familiar with. We do have Opera but it irritates me. Dad insists its better, but I am not convinced.

Welcome, of course. I thought that's what you meant (about the 'name in your arms' thing) but perhaps you could make it a bit clearer, even to the point of ...

Personally, I love it. Way to go Nate :D!

Well nuts to you Incandescence. Personally, I like Shakespeare, but only when I'm studying the plays. I like going into depth and looking at overall theme and stuff. Its a ...

That is so, like, weird that you know about blond/e and totally dont know that guys are brunets. At least, I think they are? Whatever. Anyway, brunette or brunet, it ...

I did this a while ago but redid it just now and got 81. Cant remember my previous score. The only reason it was so low was because I was ...

Gah now I'm addicted to this thread too. I just read through 12 pages of strange posts and cool pictures. Nobody looks anything like I pictured them, but since you ...

Forgive me for my lack of enthusiasm, but I have to say my response to this poem is basically, well, BLAH. Wulie, so far I've read quite a bit of ...

Meh. Just...meh. I'm sure you're sick of hearing this, but it needs depth, it needs needs revision. Dont get me wrong, I'm not saying its a bad poem. It has ...

This poem definitely has potential CarsandGuitars. There are some revisions that should be made but the premise is great. Somewhere back in the past, I remember that I met you. ...

I agree with Firestarter about those two points. Nice question, but the second 'like' has to go. Also, its a good poem, but it kind of....just....stops. Dead. Like, nowhere to ...