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Well C&G you're in luck, because I certainly can tell you exactly what I like and dislike, LOL ;) She was lost at the bottom of her bed - her ...

I have to admit, I almost stopped reading. There is no life in this poem until the third verse or so, and it just didnt seem worth the effort at ...

I like this poem. I think it has a sweetness to it that many poems lack. Do you remember when we used to play limbs intertwined one person two heads? ...

Far be it for me to discourage you, but to be honest, I wasnt that thrilled with either poem. Granted, this is only my opinion and dont let it deter ...

I loved it. Seriously, it was beautiful and well written, and I love your imagery. There isnt anything I can find to critique really, although I do agree with Incandescence ...

With a wee bit of work this could be an awesome poem. I never knew When I had you close How lucky I really was I reckon this should read ...

I liked it. It was kind of...lyrical, lol which is why its in lyric poetry, obviously. I need to find that theasaurus. Anyway, you probably will look back and find ...

Personally I have no real problem with the net. Sure, I get a few freak-outs and attacks of absolute paranoia sometimes, but usually I give my first name (if I ...

I'm a musical-addict too. I loved Phantom - the colours, the music and the overall beauty of the film really blew me away. At that time of course I hadnt ...

The truth and nothing but the truth - so I suppose it has a ring to it. Personally I think its not one of my best efforts, but it does ...

Cheers, Firestarter, and right back atcha ;) And thanks Tara, I love my hair too (told you I was vain, LOL). Soyala, I like both pictures - you remind me ...

Possession personally, I know I've never seen a bigger silence than the one that stretches out between us (deeper than a universe)– but did you really think that wrapping yourself ...

skinny-dipping

Me, I'm exhausted. Just spent an hour in the garden, weeding and trimming and its BOILING outside. So I'm totally zonked. Not to mention all prickly and sweaty and covered ...

Cheers, convintojm. I've altered 'despite itself' but I've just got in from an hour of hard work in the garden so dont expect any miracles.