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:shock: LOVE the poem. Seriously. Its unique, its sweet, its lovely. I especially liked the way you worded everything so simply, and the unique rhyme scheme you used. Absolutely beautiful. ...

I hated it. No, really. :^o 8-[ Regardless of the finesse, however, it kind of struck me as being...pointless - and the last stanza was too abrupt for my tastes. ...

:shock: I think I need to check that I really am still alive, and not in a coma having hallucinations. You didnt just say something nice , did you, Incandescence? ...

Oooh tough one... NINJAS! No. Hobbits. NO! NINJAS!...OK, I'll just have to agree to disagree with myself. Elephants or mice?

Oooh tough one... NINJAS! No. Hobbits. NO! NINJAS!...OK, I'll just have to agree to disagree with myself. Elephants or mice?

I have tried it - it didnt find anything. Thats why I posted here.

Well most all our NZ slang is also Aussie slang...there's a moral in that somewhere, but I'm too lazy to tell ya what it is. Lets see if I can ...

I cant be bothered going back through the whole thread so I dont know if this has been said before, but... Personally, I find honesty a big issue - not ...

Congrats Nate! You're lucky - I guess. Personally (and I know you guys are gonna kill me) I'm going to stay at school as long as I can. I can ...

I get it from my mum and dad: as a toddler, I'd force my poor, long-suffering parents to tell me stories about this doll I was obsessed with at the ...

Hey guys, I'm looking for a poem posted on this site a few months back, went something like "children die - c'est la vie" in the first line. I loved ...

personal reaction was overwhelmingly "Huh?!". It just seems like a random collection of words and images to me. You have a nice rhythm and I like your style, but there's ...

Damn but you're good! I have to say this is one of my favourites by you. Hell, one of my favourites on the entire board. Love it. Keep up the ...

Thanks, both of you. It has been too long! But I'm back again at last :). Odd thing is, I was actually writing about a little figurine when I wrote ...

Hey rachel. Thanks for your review of my poem, "Only Human". Thought I'd check out some of your work :D For something off the top of your head, this isnt ...