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3 April 1. destination point I dreamed last night of roadmaps of glass in my palms, the dip of my wrist turned dimpling upward to receive your lips I have ...

Beautiful, as usual. Am also stalking this thread now XD

I can't believe I almost forgot about NaPo! I didn't write a poem yesterday, so will have to catch up sometime later in the month. In the meantime, here's today's ...

Hi jujubean05, welcome to YWS! Re: your poem. To be honest, it didn't really grab me. I appreciate the sentiment and you've done a good job with the rhyming, but ...

Hi paperhearts, welcome to YWS! Re: your poem. I like the choice of genre - prose poems are really fun to read, but they don't seem to be very popular ...

That is a pointless question. Of course homosexuality is natural. It exists. It's part of nature. It's not artificially induced, supernatural in origin or a pretense that is assumed or ...

Watch this space.

pygmalion's lament if it is true that all we are recycles and exhales then you have shared the air of Adam still heavy with scent from the Paradise Garden in ...

the linguist I am learning another language hanging my thoughts on grammar syntax, punctuation caught by the concave husk of vowels at the roof of your mouth and we stitch ...

Oh, lovely. I love the way you've layered the meaning of the deadheads and connected it with the gardener's own aging process. Gorgeous. I had a problem with "tendons" in ...

shells [edited] to catch a sunrise, I sit facing out into a window or a wide space, watching letting the world grow the way an artist waits for a painting ...

laying foundations [edited] We are caught in that open space between talking and not talking wood at our backs, beneath our feet alone in a house built out of a ...

While I Was Sleeping I have folded myself up in sleep this morning, so that when I hear your old car stop in the driveway it's ancient engine wheezing like ...

Hi TL G-Wooster, Here's the review you requested :) I'm kind of two minds when it comes to this poem (ha, that's actually kind of ironic...). On the one hand, ...

Hi personalinsanity, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get to know the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem ...