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5/10 - meh. Too short.

The Wild, Wild West **coughs**

5/10 because its OK, only I feel a "but - " coming on whenever I see it. :roll:

^ failed to mention whether or not she is a POTO fan (and is YET AGAIN the person above me, LOL)

Changing the word (can I do that?) to: LAND

spittoon (these things during the late 18th and early 19th centry they had for people to spit in so they wouldnt spit in the street and thus spread disease :shock: ...

What good would that do?

Dark. Do you write well? (Sorry Areida, technically thats still an unacceptable answer)

There is obviously a great deal of emotion behind this, and in some places your word choice is astounding. Very profound, Nate. Kudos :wink:

^ likes Phantom of the Opera (me too!!!)

^ 7/10 it's good, but you've got grammatical errors (and I feel fussy today)

6/10 - Thought-provoking but too long

^ is YET AGAIN the person above me.... :lol:

By the way, Nate, your avatar is seriously creep-diddly-eepy.

Well I'm smack-diddly-dab (oh God, channeling Flanders) in the mid-diddly-iddle camp, folks. Neither here nor usual. My mum's had some pretty weird experiences with ghosts and I [looks proud] actually