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I wrote this a while ago and just reread it tonight- liking it, I thought I'd post it here for review and revision. Be brutal, people! :lol: ...no, seriously. Dont ...

Butterflies “There’s nothing special about butterflies,” he insists. “They’re born, they eat, they sleep, they fly, they mate, and then they die. End of story.” “But they’re beautiful,

It wasnt ME it was ELLIE! **glares** TPBM has a secret crop of alien brains growing in their back garden.

Spectacular. I almost tripped up on the line breaks in the second stanza (maybe you could smooth those out a little) but after that I was hooked. Loved it. Particularly ...

WHEE! FIRST REPLY! I win! I win! I WIN!....uh, yeah. 8-[ :roll: Anyway, HELLO! WELCOME TO YWS!!! So pleased, mister Reclaimer, sir, SO pleased. Tea? No, really. Have some. OR ...

7/10 because I said so.

Hehe thats actually really sweet (no pun intended) and quite clever. It does need some work IMHO, but it tickles me for some reason. Anyways, some suggestions: If you were ...

HEY! **dances** I'm from good old Aoetearoa (sp?) also. Welcome to YWS! You're lucky, I'm sane right now. :lol: :lol: :lol:

6/10 because I've seen it before, but its still cool :lol:

^ 7/10 coz it involves FIRE! FLAMES! FIRE!...uh, yeah.

^ is 2 years younger than me

Haha! I *can* fly! (jumps off tall building)...or not. TPBM has green hair coming out of their ears.

5/10 - slightly funny, but I dont like Stewie

Indeed, I dooooo... TPBM took about 30 seconds to work out what TPBM means.

6/10 coz I used to watch Charmed lol