bubblewrapped

OK, thanks for all the help guys! Here's an edited version - Intellectual Barbie 2.0: Here I am; make me pretty, make me shine like city lights and polished steel. ...

5/10 (Psst! Are you really 99 years old?)

Well, I went to the clinic, but the psychologist had a mental breakdown and had to be committed before they could pronounce me certifiable. TPBM lives in a haunted house.

Let us now acknowledge the truth – between the two of us, you’ve been laughing at me all along haven’t you? Oh don’t deny it just to spare my feelings. ...

Here I am – make me pretty, let me shine like city lights and polished steel. Make me up so I can pretend that I am plastic because real skin ...

Nope; no tests in the forseeable future (i.e. within the next two-three weeks). TPBM has a tribble!

I thank Nate every day that that isnt true :shock: :lol: TPBM is purple.

8/10 gotta love the dark you have chocolate chip?

How did you guess? Chocolate is my favourite food in the universe (and yes, I've tried EVERYTHING EDIBLE...dont ask) TPBM's shoelace is untied

6/10 because blue and red together make my eyes itch

I have to agree. The ending needs more punch- it kind of dwindles away. Maybe if you either add another stanza or alter the ones you already have to add ...

I'm always hungry. TPBM is really a goose in disguise.

Hey, cool thread! ^_^ My username basically originated when I decided to join YWS. I was looking at the registration form and thinking, OK, what the hell am I going ...

There! I really went wild with the commas, and, wonder of wonders, it actually kinda looks better. **sigh** I need to fire my wordprocessing prog. My lack of dialogueness(?) is ...

**moans** Stupid dialogue grammar. What is this discrimination against full stops, anyway? **glares** Gah. LOL, anyway, I'll go through and edit when I get the time (its practically midnight here ...