bubblewrapped

Whee! Patronizing much? Sorry :shock: but I'd hate to get critiques like that. :lol: Unfortunately though, I've gotta agree on the basics. This is a pretty novice poem - good, ...

Well, I liked it. Personally, the first few lines (which seem to be the subject of much controversy here, LMAO) were what made it for me. I think people are ...

"You must certainly be a formidable fighter," I said, eyeing the dagger. I was almost tempted to snatch it out of the air on the next twirl - it was ...

I affected an expression of admiration. "You killed some dwarves?" I exclaimed. "How brave! Were there many of them?"

I thanked the elf for his help, but I dont think he heard me. He waved a hand vaguely in my direction and staggered off a few steps, then collapsed ...

Well, I'm into Old English heroic poetry at the moment (Beowulf) so I figured I'd start a Storybook RPG based loosely around that. You know - semi-Christian society, feuds, hellish ...

For some reason, this song really, well, "hit" me, lol. I love it, particularly the last line. Excellent delivery. The only bit that irks me a little is the first ...

I had barely reined in my horse before I was bombarded with questions. "Who are you? What the hell are you doing here, and what do you know of Dwarves?" ...

OK cool, I get it. Shocked Well, this kind of depends on the degree of shock. If I'm really shocked, I kind of get this ringing whine in my ears, ...

Suddenly, the sound of hooves disturbed the renewed silence of the forest. Turning suddenly in alarm, the three companions saw a young woman on a grey horse emerge from amidst ...

Yes that is an odd request. I'd like to help you, but I'm not sure what you want. What do you mean, "in a physical circumstance"? Do you mean, how ...

I didn’t mean to tell you that you’re terrible I never meant to say you have no talent In fact I never intended to talk to you at all. It ...

Hey innerbeauty, welcome to YWS. Hope you're enjoying the site so far. As regards your poem: I can definitely see where you're coming from here, and I like the way ...

Warning, warning, frankness ahead! Armor on? OK, good. Here we go. To start with, I love the first two stanzas. They have a great rhythm and a sense of freshness, ...

7/10 - I agree. Anyone who likes Family Guy is strange to me LMAO :lol: