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oops sorry about the typos in my last post :)

Ilove your pictures. Usually I don't like nature photography but your pistures are just so good! I love the ones of the flowers and also the last but one picture. ...

I like the chaos this poem described. I remember when I was in year 3. Year 3 was a good year but, I digress :) Honestly I really liked it. ...

I’m looking for completeness, Trying to find what cannot be, I’m trying to find reason, In this cold reality, And every time I see the sun, A cloud moves over ...

I think this was beautifull y written. :) I have also never written a sonnet before, and I think it must have taken considerable talent to write this one. I ...

Although this poem was a little strange I did like it. I like the first three lines the most because that act as a kind of introduction to the atmosphere ...

The air alight with flashes and rockets, Curling tendrils of smoke and shimmering embers, The sky rippling, Like a thunderstorm, But sweet with children's laughter, The colours vivid with merriment, ...

I'm searching for your voice, Screaming out, Helpless in this world, Call out to me, My child, My joy, Call out to me, Let me hear you live, Hold on, ...

I liked this poem. It was mysterious and calming with a kind of tranquil nature. Although I do agree that some changes in the language you used could help. Overall ...

I really liked this poem. It's funny, easy to understand and has a great rhyming scheme :). By the way I love the word "asunder".