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Didn't much like the poem subject, it's been a bit overused and this puts people off. Also the language, the variation in it is strange. You use words like "hot" ...

These words crowd me Pushing and shoving, Fighting and screaming, Their meaning into my head In desperation Their haggard arms reach out Grasping my mind Calling so painfully To be ...

It’s raining I’m glad I have your umbrella. You left it with me remember? I guess you don’t It was nothing to you. That’s strange Because that umbrella Burns my ...

You wrote me love poems They sounded so cliche I never asked for more But your words Flew to me I did not know That I could be loved I ...

A set of pills to take To dull your ever stabbing heart break Floating on 2-10 tablets Drifting on a cloud of chemical bliss Wondering why those people back away ...

Like person before me said, title's too cliche for such an un-cliche song. I love the "Has holiness betrayed me" although you put and extra has in. It's such a ...

I loved these lyrics. Everybody else has already pointed out all the holes i saw in it so I'll just say that I really want to hear this song sung ...

I’m walking out the door again These tears fall like rain upon The dreams I had to trample, to get to you I knew it would be hard I knew ...

I know this is my poem and really I shouldn't post anything except the poem, but I just wanted to say I'm sorry it's so long. I would have just ...

Spent my days and nights, Wondering where I went wrong, Then I realised, I have been wrong all along, Looked into your eyes, Thought I saw somewhere to belong, I ...

Are those memories as close to you As they are to me? Do you ever wonder What can or cannot be? Is all of this dark in life Surrounding you ...

Ireally liked this poem. It had heart. Though youer rhyming scheme was a bit all over the place, but then again I can't say much since non e of my ...

Amongst the chattering reeds I lie, Listening, To the birds gossip, And the trees creaking back and forth, I watch lazily, As the river meanders thoughtfully, Its waters quivering at ...

The darkness surrounds me, And everything’s black, And the people around me are grey, And I find myself thinking, When can I leave this, When can I find my own ...

I did actually like this poem. Although it made me wonder whether the demons in it were actual demons or just metaphors for the evil in the world? I'm sorry ...