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Do you want to review my prologue? : ) It's fantasy fiction and only 500 words or so. Here's the link:

Thank you, guys. This is really helpful. Before I start writing on the story, maybe I should rewrite this prologue first? And then submit it.. : )

*Review* Over all I really liked it. You should definitely continue the story. I'm curious to see who the main character is. Thank you. Well, I see now that I've ...

Well, this is the first time I submit a story. A prologue. It is not that long, though, but does it really matter? I'm also not very good with prologues, ...

Wow, you're really good! : ) This won't be a long review, because I'm not the person who notice 'errors'.. But this drawing was absolutely great! And very cute. I ...

I will not correct your grammar. I'm not good at that. But I think what you have written is good, and I look forward to read the first chapter. The ...

Roxy ~ District 7 I couldn’t wait until it was my turn. All the other tributes had had a successful interview with Marcus Hunt, so I thought I would have ...

Thanks for your reviews : ) This is really helpful.

Well, thanks. I didn't plan this script, though. I just wrote it down when I was bored.. But I'll write a story and make it longer, I think : )

I noticed that you had a capital letter in a few words in the middle of the sentence, and they shouldn't be there. I also think that you can use ...

Thanks for the review, Nephthys. Well, maybe I could make this into a story instead? That might be a better idea. I think I'll do that. Maybe I'll write another ...

Add 'Bubblee' to your friend list, please? : )

I've read it. It was awesome, just like you said. I didn't like Daniel in the beginning, but now I love him..

If you want, you can review my script? I'm still kind of new when it comes to writing scripts, though.

I don't know if you review scripts, but I'll be very glad if you take a look at it. I'm still kind of new when it comes to writing scripts. ...