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Re: Class in the Field House Elevator
I feel this poem is incomplete. Some of the similies make no sense. I don't understand how a catwalk compares to a school bus. I. Think free verse "poems" are ...
Mar 28, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1
This is a great story. It shows how moms are overprotective and how they do not give teenagers enough privacy. I particularly enjoyed the secret compartment with the candy and ...
Mar 28, 2013
