bryan

Oh wow i dont think i have a favorite but im deffinately sure this a strong one... When you write let your mind flow and dont force out ideas otherwise ...

Welcome fellow writers! i hope you enjoy the pleasure of posting, reveiwing, and learning from all this site has to offer. its wonderful here so get some points and start ...

Hmmm i hate this =( i feel like its way to sad and too confusing for people to understand. Also its quite long and kinda jumps around i think. Im ...

I know not the reason for which i have been cursed, I only know the pain it yeilds. I do not bleed. Though i prefer it, for I suffer far ...

First off this was intense i loved it. Especially this part: He fired the gun, for the first time, making him pushed backwards due to the opposing forces. The witch ...

Nice work but a few pointers. Well i make so many mistakes i tend to see others pretty easily you know. Ah first thing grammer "You are very handsome and ...

Im a fan already. i havent really followed this novel but jumping into the middle of it makes me want to start from page one. It could use some more ...

Good job im loving it so far keep it up. Just some advice though; kick up the action just a bit. I want to see some of the scenes become ...

Good job im loving it so far keep it up. Just some advice though; kick up the action just a bit. I want to see some of the scenes become ...

Whoa! Man this was good you gotta keep this going man i loved it. It's got all the literature of a really advanced novel but its amazing how your not ...

First off... I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THIS! "[thinking little of my mother’s icy stare that I can feel upon my father’s feet, watching as though not to trust the steps he ...

This is real good i loved the ryhthym and seriousness of the poem. I could see this as being one of our nations poems that a president might read at ...

Im semi confused by this dude. I dont know if you were intending on being vague but thats how i envisioned it. There was alot of bouncing around and your ...

Amazing. is this a personal experience? I hope not because it is so sad for one to feel so alone and in pain. You really did a great job capturing ...

Jaw dropping really! i can feel all the love in your poem. I think your use of the seasons captures the natural beauty of being in love. I think using ...