bryan

In the calm of night, In the absence of light, screams fill the air in song. Your voice and mine, souls left behind, though some screams do not belong. Blue ...

This isnt bad. Actually it was pretty good for the most part. I think it could be a little longer though, you should elaborate more on the points you list ...

I liked this. good job overall. I think it could use some touching up though because it's kind of vague and a little bland. I got the general impression of ...

Hey this seems like a real good book you got coming along. I dont think many people review it yet though because they probably don't understand the intensity or complex ...

Great poom! i really liked it. Im going to piggyback off the first person that reviewed your poem. There could be some grammatical improvements like: wounds bigger than should be ...

This was funny: The hunchback lady behind the front desk says that she’ll personally drop kick me into the pond out front if she catches me just waiting here again. ...

Right from the start i was drawn to reading this, and thats one of the most important things a writer should know how to do. You have to be able ...

This part had to be my favorite. Inside out. Hack it out with a knife. All your pain and sufferings. And all will be left will be your stoned heart, ...

I loved this. It was written, or maybe just the way i read it, with a poetic sense and it was really interesting to read. Loved it. At first you ...

Great job and way to be creative and original. Not alot of people still do alot of poetry that include ryhming but still are advanced and a quick tip, dont ...

Wow good job really keep it up!

I cant even describe how good that was i mean really! --"Last nightI think I dreamt of cancer. I dreamt of my bones emptying onto the floor, like they were ...

Great poem. I liked the first passage "I sip tea while night rain erodes your dignity -- yes there is pride in poverty like hanging menwe cherish our threads" i ...

Hey this is some good stuff! i especially loved this part: [“W-what are you trying to do to me?” He stuttered. He remembered the animals and talk of the other ...

Wow these are from your cell phone? Stunning! good job =)