brokeninpieces

It wasn't bad, bittersweet. I couldn't but feel as if I were talking about MY Superman.

Good, really good, I got confused a little though...

I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.

I love it, and I told you that you were good, this helps prove it.

I agree with TheTruthLiesWithin.

I really liked this poem, the flow was good. Really good.

I absolutely love it, good job! Make some more, please.

Really cool looking, what camera do you use?

Good, but needs more figurative language, but still good without.

It's beautiful, and reminds me of when I was young and innocent.

It's really good and sad, it reminded me of my ex boyfriend. I really liked it.

Thank you, I love this place already. XP

That was awesome! I loved it. It was sad, and reminded me of the past. Maybe that's why it's so good, because it hit something inside of me too and ...

That was really good. How long have you been writing? If your like me it'd be around 7 years, you should really publish them.

The poison running down my lips, I swallow every last drop. Smiling, I look at you. It’s time to be with you finally. No one to say it’s wrong, to ...