brokeninpieces

I agree with cupcake. It is good and the ending shocked me. I like it, and I've gone through the same thing so this poem relates to my past which ...

Haha, funny, but got to admit it that it does sound like a vent. Try again with the venting and you could find something that feels right and maybe if ...

I like it, it reminds me of things I have done, so I can relate to it. Poetry you can relate to, I think is the best. But... I think ...

It's not my usual kind of poem, but I do like it. It reminds me of Loretta Lynn. Was she your inspiration? If not, listen to her song, it's a ...

Ok, I really like it even if you put it in the wrong area. It has attitude and just makes me want to say 'Hell ya!' Excuse the French, but ...

Really good, but I agree it needs some work, but it is good. Keep working on it and it could be another classic.

Cold , alone, she stood like a silent sentinel. Unwavering, she looked at them as they left her. To them, she looked cold and uncaring. What they couldn’t see; was ...

Awesome, really awesome. Doesn't need really any work, you should publish. I really am amazed how good some of these people are on here, and you're definetly one of them.

Not bad, but why so many big words? Some people (like me) don't understand a couple of those. But it is good and sad. Just add some more figurative language, ...

Really good, but needs some work. I've wrotten several poems like that so I know where you're coming from. But really, it is good, just take sometime to work on ...

Really good, emotional, and gets to the reader. Though, I agree with some that the last part needs some work. But it is good.

Haha, I love it. Attitude in a poem, nice. And so true for so many people, ccould use some work though, but good so far.

Awesome! It's like my Chucky, haha.

It reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's 'Alone'.

Really good, I could feel the anger and violence as if it was my own.