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I agree with everyone, it's very good. (I got it to work, so I can comment!) I really liked it, really awesome. Good job! "India, India, India!" - The Master ...

Thanks everybody! (Again)

Thanks everybody! :) I didn't really like this poem, but I'm glad you did. And I agree, it does need some work, but this is my first poem that's actually ...

It was just about enojoying nature and life. I meant to make the reader think of their inner child, like when they were young and innocent, not tainted by the ...

Thanks wolfman, and I've been thinking about it, but I haven't decided yet. Any ideas?

I love it! Deep but brief. Sweet too. Good job! :D

I don't know about this poem, so here you go! Red, black, pink, white, yellow… All the colors of the rainbow I can see. Reaching out I cusp one, two ...

I wrote this poem when I was kind of out of it, so please don't judge too harshly: You scream at me. I look down, away from your eyes. I ...

I don't really like this poem, so bear with me and tell me what you think. The screams echo in my head as I try to control them. Try to ...

I really liked it, it reminded me of the mistakes I've made with the people I loved, so it was a bit of a downer for me, but that's alright. ...

I liked it, something I could relate to. It was clear, not something you could easily NOT understand, there were a few grammer errors, but otherwise, pretty damn good. Haha, ...

Wow, just wow. I've never seen a poem quite like it... It's original, creative, and I love it! Good job, so far, I like all of your poetry. You'll be ...

Are you okay dude? If not, please don't do anything you'd regret! I have, and I've found it's not worth it. But, I love this poem. It's sad, tragic, and ...

I loved it! It was something I could relate to and was kind of sad, and just good. I find nothing wrong with it at all. So, good job.

It's really cute, but I agree it needs some more work. It has a nice idea, and it does ryhme, but that isn't everthing. Work on it a little bit ...