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I like it, but in some parts I was confused a bit... Maybe you should go through it and change some parts? But really, I did like it, very original. ...

Thanks people! I love you for loving my poem! I was hoping that this was something that could be felt and understood, if I got that reaction from you, than ...

I have blue eyes! I love this poem for the emotion it draws, good job!

I just wrote this poem in like 2 seconds. I miss you. I hate how it’s true. I love you. The words I wish I didn’t feel. I hunger for ...

It's no problem and I thank you.

I know, my bad, but it;s something I really feel, so it's all good.

Thanks cupcake, cute name by the way.

Thanks everybody! This poem, is VERY special to me. If some of you don't get it, let me explain. I have done a lot of things I regret, and still ...

I walked down the aisle With roses in my hand. A flower in my hair And petals below my feet. I saw you smile And reach out for me. I ...

I have to agree with everyone. I really like it and I also love the way you used old English and yet your a modern writer. So, good job. :) ...

WOW!!! I love it! I could never write anything like this. I'm a stickler for capitalization though, so that's the only thing I can find wrong with this. Otherwise, it's ...

I like it, it's something almost everyone could relate to but... It's missing something and some stanzas were hard for me to comprehend, which just might be me but I ...

9/10 PrettyTutu!

I like it, it's short but not simple, like most short poems. It has a hidden meaning that is easy to see, but is beautiful and unique. Though, I'd switch ...

Thanks everybody, I still don't like it but I'm happy some of you like it. Also, thanks for the tips, I'll probably have to edit it sometime, but right now ...