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9:48 The only minute I don't hate And just 5 minutes before I meet my fate 9:49 The sweetest minute of the night In hell, I dine 4 from now, ...

To be honest, you should turn the wine part into it's own separate poem. It just doesn't fit with the bit about social networking (not that well, anyway). Well, it ...

I think it was rather obvious that it was the moon, no offense. But is that necessarily a bad thing? Your descriptions were very deep; I don't really want to ...

So do I have to completely revamp the character or can you just nullify all the abilities I put? The latter would work much better I think.

Name: Terza Rima Gender: male Age: 16 years old Instrument: Trumpet Appearance: I have straight red hair, green eyes, and a palish complexion. I wear a purple cloak and black ...

I can't really say anything about this poem without giving a full on analysis, and I'm not too great at those. However, I did like the stanza that ended with ...

You are science. You are biology, Chemistry, And the link between the two. Your heart is space, Astrology and Astronomy, And everything in between. But you are going to die. ...

Hi there! I really liked this for how you told a story in three different, unique ways. In the first part, it does deliver the basic information, and you don't ...

I'm not going to spend 300 points to make 3 different parts of the same story. Until I completely revamp this, that won't happen. and even then, it will likely ...

Thank you for your critique, and I agree with most things you've said. The story definitely does need some editing, especially to make the characters deeper, and there are many ...

Crushing the ant represents the territorial attitude I take on in the poem. And the description of the white wall is supposed to be simple; it is simply a canvas ...

You have a good point, but the plot is not short by any means. Besides, the idea of the style I'm using is to create many changes in the characters ...

(First and foremost, I apologize for the length. If you do not read the full thing in one sitting, I don't blame you, but I at least recommend that you ...

This is the kind of poem that tells you, straight up, its themes. The comparisons you make are pretty blatant, and yet they make complete sense. The rhymes are good, ...

Hahaha, ironically enough, this is a poem I had to write for my english class, and believe me, she's seen it. Said it was a little too dark for the ...