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First off, I LOVED the ending quotation. It really did a good job at bringing the entire thing together, and it cleared many things up. The use of the word ...

Well that was...unexpected. In a good way, though, for the most part at least. Once you said "pondering" I was expecting some really deep, insightful, math-related thoughts. And while this ...

I. A walk through a Japanese garden I'm walking now, very slowly. The leaves bristle as a slight breeze passes. The trees start to shake. No, no, I tell myself. ...

I really liked this. Your writing style is absolutely wonderful, though a little confusing at times. But it's a good kind of confusing! At the end I was asking myself ...

I just wanna say, these are the worst lyrics I have ever written. I've actually speedwritten for this premise of a "fantastic miraculous day" and they turned out better than ...

FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY Roads of neon red and blue Peaches biting bread and true Stories being told This is getting old Tired of the lies, GONNA KILL SOME FLIES FANTASTIC-ALLY, MIRACULOUS-LY ...

Thanks! I tried to create a central theme that would stick throughout, then completely change it while still keeping the original theme.

The house is not a home When the people living there aren't really there. When the mother, the father, the son and daughter shift in and out of existence with ...

Thank you very much! I think there are some really cheesy areas that I want to edit, but I think that won't be any time soon.

Haha thanks! To be honest, and this is to all of you out there, I do not think I wrote this poem as well as I really could have. There ...

Thanks! :)

Haha, those are two problems I noticed myself too, but I really didn't even try to fix them, because I liked it just the way it was. Thank you for ...

Haha thanks, I don't really see my self explaining it further because part of why I really am proud of this piece is the sense of mystery. Also, I had ...

It's there to not interfere with the "the line is drawn" part. In other words, I wanted to stick that in there to keep with the rhyme scheme of the ...

It may seem weird, but I did that on purpose. "out of the" seems WAY too generic to me, but "out of blue" just flows nicer, which is the idea ...