brix_strat

Thank you very very much. I will definitely look into those things. ^-^ I plan to write some more to chapter 1 tonight. I'm debating whether (sp?) or not I'm ...

I agree. You need a little more description. Describe how they talk maybe? What they are doing while they talk? Otherwise I think it sounds very interesting. :3 keep writing. ...

((Alright, I came up with this Idea last night at around 10:00 pm and have no idea if it's good or not but tell me what you think of it ...

Thank you. Those sound like good sugestions. I'll change that. Now...I just have to figure out where I'm going with this thing because it was a story my friend and ...

WAFFLES! I love waffles. xD And yes, my doggies ARE cute. I'll have to put up eh picture of 'em sometime. :3

That's a good Idea, I'll think about it. I am always open for suggestions. : D

Thank you. Typos suck...when typing...they are so dang annoying, then i can never find them when I re-read my work. >.

Thought I'd just resurect this and bring it to the front. It's been awhile. so...erm...yes. : D

Thank you both! That helps alot! I will most definately work with what you have said. : D

That...was REALLY good. Like...amazing. You are a super amazing writer. Keep it up! Dang, I couldn't stop reading. That is a good sign, its normally hard to get me interested ...

Awesome. Crawled? That is so freaking sweet! And I do Love animals. Sometimes I think I can really express myself in writing pretty well, other times...not as much. It kinda ...

Heya! I love to write fantasy stories, and I do write a little poetry. And I have 1 sibling...but she is 7 years older and lives in Arkansas. We never ...

Hey, the name's Brit. Well...Brittany, but most of those I know call me Brit. Or Brix, or Shade, or Pride, but...let's just stick with Brit or Brix. I'm not new ...

I'm bad at grammer. lol. Thank you for the input.

The snowflakes had just begun to fall silently to the ground in the moonlight as two figurines stood on a snow laden hill, silhouetted against the midnight sky. “You ready ...