britlitfantw

Great job. The one thing I might suggest is to tighten up some lines, so they have the same meaning but aren't so long. It breaks the flow of the ...

I don't really feel there are too many 'fear's in the last part. I think repitition suits a poem sometimes, and this was one of those times. This was a ...

[pre]Hi everyone, Um, my name's Tori, and, as you can tell from my screen name, I adore British Literature (and history) though I'm NOT British: Canadian, and PROUD of it! ...