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This is made clearer in the next scene, but she actually wants to be a historian -- she loves history. Dance is something that she's passionate about as well, and ...

Hey guys, I'm revising my novel right now to send to agents in the upcoming year, and I was wondering if you could just tell me what you think of ...

What happens to you (mentally?) when you are separated from something/someone you love? I still live my life, I still listen to people, I still contribute, but at night, when ...

First, may I give you a round of applause? This is better than anything I wrote at 14 (haha, like that’s so long ago ^_^ ) and made my eyes ...

... definitely very gripping. I'm curious to know why she's there, who she is, what's going on, etc. Your imagery is very good, and this line especially stuck with me: ...

Author's Note: Mainly what I'm curious about here is, are their reactions realistic, and are the characters fairly consistent? Thanks guys! :) ~~ Michelle rushed into the hospital, a middle-aged ...

Excellent job - I don't generally read this sort of story, not that I have anything against them, they just don't always hold my interest; however, this kept me reading, ...

Bending the truth So you make me Feel like there’s Nothing I can do You make me feel At fault, as though It’s all my doing And it just isn’t ...

I'm not a guy, but, in terms of the writing in general, I really liked it! Your description was good, I didn't feel like you were 'telling' rather than 'showing'; ...

Yes, I understand that the pacing is very slow; unfortunately, I can't write it any other way and still say what I want to say. Also ... well, lets just ...

I slammed my locker shut, stretched luxuriously like a cat, and tucked my yearbook under one arm. Grinning infectiously at my friend, I scuffled my red hair with my hand ...

Thanks Sam. :) I'm glad you think it's cool. It's actually sort of a, narrative of something that happened in my life...I had to get it down on paper. Obviously, ...

Brianna leaned back in the green deck chair, reading the letter she held in her hands. It was a nice letter: full of news, very descriptive, questions were asked about ...

Thanks for your crits guys. :) I wrote this poem when I was feeling a little depressed, so I'm surprised you thought it was cute Misty, but that's cool! Different ...

Sometimes I hate These feelings inside It feels like Something is burning Coming from Nowhere I know But maybe I can stop it but how I wish these Feelings would ...