britishwannabe

I always see phrases like "Silent Scream", and wanted to try writing something along those lines. But not like the normal things stemming from it. I don't know if I ...

i love the morbid to this, its how i feel and how i write to. and writing morbid is always so in depth. i really felt your pain, your sorrow. ...

this is amazing! you described her exactly as she is, exactly what she does. ive felt her stab me over and over again and even just reading this made me ...

Ive had all the happiness sucked from my world I hear the cries and yet theres nothing I can do I feel the pain but yet I am numb All ...

i related to this poem and i bet a lot of people did to which makes the poem more real, i like how you picked a topic people could easily ...

its nice and simple and to the point. and i like how the beginning is almost the same

this is really good! its simple but if you look deeper its got a good message. i love you metephors they really brought it together

this is really good and it made me think, i got lost in the words and was sad when it was over keep writing you have natural talent

this is really good, it really made me think and consider what you said

this is really really real! i felt like it was happening to me it actually made me shudder. did this happen to you? because it was real and flowed so ...

i really love the first verse its really good and i love the chorus to its something you wont get tired of and it would be nice to listen to, ...

this is really good! I love how the beginning strings along well. i love the metaphors you use it really made me think and put me into the song. i ...

a lot of it was just random, maybe try having all of the things connect in some sot of way, it just seemed a little pointless though if you get ...

this poem flows really well, i could read it through very easily

its really cute and even from when you were seven you can tell you had great potential! now i wanna read your new stuff! keep writing