britishwannabe

i apologize for the format! Ive feared my mistakes to face them to look and to listen Ive sat here alone behind my 2 way mirror Watching life go on ...

i like melting a lot but i didn't quite care for louder yet because it was vague. melting was a pretty landscape painted in my head while louder yet was ...

this is utter amazingness! i love the metaphor and how its kept through out the whole poem instead of just for one line or stanza. and we were just talking ...

ok i found this really interesting because its one of those poems with a twist ending. i love the love affair metephor its really smart and i love how you ...

this was really good except the chicken and rice didnt fit. it did rhyme but in a poem its more important to make sence and have it all connect then ...

This is my farewell To the love, I once knew This is my farewell My last words for you My goodbye, To the guy I once knew My love, My ...

hi :D okay i love the first stanza its like your asking them questions but the reader can still feel like your talking to them. Do you know what it ...

Alone, Forgoten, You don’t care, You’ve left me behind, To burn, the flames are upon me, Yet I feel no warmth; Only the coldness you’ve left in my heart, The ...

this is just amazing

Where would you turn up a song? 
Like Baby on the sea. Except the sky is black today- Baby’s eye transfixed on me. I pity what knows the sun once ...

Verse 1: You want me to burn Suffer You want me to drown in your rumors You first You expect me to crumble Collapse Sofficate from the happiness you’ve taken ...

Standing alone outside, waiting to feel again. But there’s no one else. I have so many voices in my head. Still I can hear your silence pushing me down. Running ...

i love how this is a poem but also like a letter. it helps show your emotions

Jut take it You’ve taken my friends, My feeling of warmth, My feeling of security, Like a raged serial killer, You’ve taken my soul; My life, My happiness, And for ...

I wrote this while mad at some of my friends. I don't exactly remember why but I do remember typing fiercely on the keyboard and saving the document. And if ...