brightangel22

Basically, it wasn't supposed to have a plot. I was just capturing a picture and to describe a pic, it has to have too much detail almost. =P

Ok, I loved the moral of the story. Some of the grammar as said above was kind of confused, but the writing was exceptionally good. The detail in the story ...

I wrote this as a short photograph basically. Once I was day dreaming and an image flashed into my head. I wrote it down so that I could remember it. ...