briggsy1996

Hey there, First off, I really enjoyed this poem- it flows quite nicely. Although maybe a little more imagery could be added to it? I don't know, it's just a ...

Hey there, So, first off I'd like to say that I don't have anything to nitpick- it all looked pretty good to me. I really enjoyed this piece; it really ...

Chapter One, Part One "Sometimes it's the smallest decisions that can change your life forever." -Keri Russell I don’t like change. It’s not the little things that I mind so ...

I rather enjoyed this! I especially liked the ending :)

Oh my goodness, that was good! So excellently written and gripping... I really enjoyed this! No nitpicks- I noticed a few spelling errors but nothing major. Looking forward to reading ...

Hey, No Nitpicks, I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this and I'm definitely keeping tabs on this story! Best wishes with your writing! :) -Briggsy

Hi there, I'm really here to critique, just to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of your story. It is excellently written, and I found myself completely hooked even ...

Hey there, I'm not an expert on critiquing, and I think anything I could have said has already been mentioned above anyhow. However, I am extremely curious about what is ...

Oh my goodness, I love this! It was the title that reeled me in, and I was not disappointed. I wasn't expecting the ending and it really caught me by ...

Hey, I am really enjoying your story- I think you have a fantastic idea going! I don't have any nitpicking, aside from one little thing: I wasn’t an angry person ...

Hey, Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your poem! Nice work :)

Hey Keren, I don't have any critiquing about this first chapter, but I am overwhelmed by curiosity about what's going to happen in this story. I liked how you started ...

Hey there- This story reeled me in from the first paragraph, and didn't disappoint throughout. It really made me think a lot about my life, and how I can relate. ...

I Just wanted to comment that this is such a powerful poem- I read it over and over, unable to stop. The imagery is excellent! I especially admired the last ...

Have you ever experienced a moment that was so surreal that you weren't sure whether or not it truly happened? Ever go through a whole day, and wake up the ...