briggsy1996

I was song number 14 "How to be dead," by Snow Patrol He listened with his ear pressed against the door. Not a single sound had emerged from the apartment ...

Hey there ; Like you, I was in kindergarten when the 9/11 took place. For this reason, I can relate entirely to your poem. It is well written, honest, and ...

Hey There, First off, this song really describes how I feel about my life at the moment, so I thought it was cool how it hit my feelings on the ...

Hey There! I really like the way you've opened up your story- right away I can sense that the narrator is down to earth and that always helps- especially in ...

Hi there! Wow! So, i haven't read any of your other works, but i saw the spoiler at the end. Its awesome you feel strongly about a topic like this. ...

Thank you both very much for your input~ I know the title says revised, but it really is still a work in progress; for whatever reason, I have always have ...

Chapter One The faded horizon I gazed upon was meshed together with a red orange flicker of the setting sun and the Pacific Ocean. The never resting sparks that bounced ...

Hey there, I see that you're new, so welcome :) For starters, I didn't notice any spelling/grammar issues, unless I missed something, so good on you for that :) Secondly, ...

This is neither the prologue to Trapped, nor the first chapter, just a snippet of the body of the story. If it captures your interest, please let me know and ...

Hey there, First off, it looks as though you're new to YWS, so welcome :D The title popped out at me because I love 'Love Story' by Taylor Swift- and ...

Hey there, So, I think I commented on an earlier chapter of this story that I'd be keeping tabs... and I have been! Holy Moly, let me say for starters... ...

Hey, I enjoyed the poem a lot, however the title confused me just a little... just a thought :) -Briggsy

Hey, I liked this- it's a poem that is very sharp and to the point- I happen to be a fan of those kinds of poems. One tiny nitpick: - ...

Hey, So, I just wanted to say that I really, really enjoyed this poem. I could tell by the title it was going to be interesting, and it was! The ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS, first off :) Secondly, I enjoyed reading your poem- I can feel that the emotion put into it was real. I can't see anything that I ...