briggsy1996

Hi there! The title immediately caught my attention, mainly because I play the saxophone and so I became curious. Anything I might've suggested has been said in earlier reviews, so ...

Hi there! I absolutely love the message of this story, and it was very touching overall. The only thing I might suggest is adding some more details about the situation ...

Hi there, so... I'm kind of at a loss for words but I think what I am getting at is that this story is very... clever. I wasn't sure what ...

There’s always that one kid in every class that feels the need to make things incredibly awkward. In my tenth grade English class, that was Jared Frost. He was the ...

Hi there! Any grammar corrections I would've made have already been mentioned, and I don't have anything to critique. I just wanted to say that this was comical and I ...

Hi there! So, I like what you've written here, it's a very captivating idea and I hope there's more!... I didn't notice any spelling or grammar either, unless I missed ...

So, I don't usually write poetry, but I was going through an old notebook and came across this. I had written it way back when my parents split up, and ...

Hi There :) So, Let me start off by saying I very much enjoyed this short story. Here are some things I particularly liked: Back then, the chair had been ...

It was one of those cold November mornings- you know, it’s not quite winter but there’s already a thin layer of sticky, ultra-white snow on the ground. I was waiting ...

Hi there! So, as short as this may be, I am stunned by the emotions I feel by reading this. I don't really know where to start... I think the ...

“So really, all you need to do is substitute the x and y values and divide the sum of the x value by itself. That way you’ll have x singled ...

Hi there Brie! :) So, many things came to my mind as I was reading this, the first being: I think you did really well with putting your story in ...

I wonder if he ever noticed, as he sat with his seemingly-flawless girlfriend, that I had fallen for him. The line of trees just outside of the high school that ...

Hi there! So I know you said in your spoiler that you wanted this story to be torn apart, but I need to say that I really, really enjoyed this. ...

Hi there! So, I've seen the picture of the falling man, and I knew as I was reading this that you had probably based it off of that picture! This ...